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I am running.
My legs are paining.
My fur is dripping sweat.
A sharp spike with every breath,
Trees are whizzing by,
The night smells non-existent.
My shiny coat is colored red with blood,
I don't know if it's mine,
But it is warm, so fresh,
I just want to lie.
A shout goes up behind me.
I am running faster.
I am the hunted.
My legs are paining.
My fur is dripping sweat.
A sharp spike with every breath,
Trees are whizzing by,
The night smells non-existent.
My shiny coat is colored red with blood,
I don't know if it's mine,
But it is warm, so fresh,
I just want to lie.
A shout goes up behind me.
I am running faster.
I am the hunted.
After a long time a poem.
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Oh, this is awesome! I absolutely love it! The imagery is fabulous!
Couple of things: Line 6, should be "of non-existence," or "non-existent."
And line 9 you should omit the word "was" it's messing up your tenses.
Couple of things: Line 6, should be "of non-existence," or "non-existent."
And line 9 you should omit the word "was" it's messing up your tenses.